Over spring break I went to the Rock festival in Turkey. This was the first music festival I have ever been to, and luckily it was all because of my friends. Ever since I met my best friend from Greece. She has always been so passionate about the music she listens to. For me, it was just some artist that played music with barely any words and that I could never connect to. I just know some of the songs from the singer but she knows well all song. Not only that, she would always dance or move to the songs that I had never seen anyone feel music like she did.

The impressive thing for the rock festival, It continued one week and every night has played a different singer until next day morning. So we have established a tent on the beach. It was amazing to experience for me even I don’t know all the lyrics from the singer. In addition, the ambiance of a music festival sparks a light inside anyone attending also the sound of quality have been fascinated for everyone. It’s an important experience for me because I met many good friends and I had a good time with my friends.

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Over spring break, I went to the Rock festival in Turkey. This was the first music festival I have ever been to, and luckily it was all because of my friends. Ever since I met my best friend from Greece she has always been so passionate about the music she listens to. For me, it was just some artist that played music with barely any words and that I could never connect to. I just know some of the songs from the singer but she knows well all song. Not only that, ___ she would always dance or move to the songs. I had never seen anyone feel music like she does.

The impressive thing for the rock festival ___ __ It continued___ one week and every night has played a different singer until next day morning. So we have established a tent on the beach. It was __ amazing to experience for me even___ I don’t know all the lyrics from the singer. In addition, the ambiance of a music festival sparks a light inside anyone attending. Also the sound of quality have been fascinated for everyone. It’s an important experience for me because I met many good friends and I had a good time with them.

 

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