Last Saturday, I visited Coca cola coliseum to watch hockey. I am not familiar with winter sports, especially, hockey is a story in a faraway country. Not to mention I know nothing about hockey, I had never watched hockey before. But, I decided to watch it. Because I wonder why Canadians are crazy about hockey so much.

Stadium is quite far form my home, and due to the closing of the TTC, it’s really hard to go there. Nevertheless, I was pretty excited the whole way to the stadium.

It was a Marlies vs Rochester. At the first round, I couldn’t get everything regarding games. I did’t understand why they take turns, and I couldn’t see the hockey puck. But, from the second round, i could enjoy the game.

One of my favorite things are connection between players and audience. The audience enjoyed the game, and cheered them up. They also got angry, when Marlies’ goal was not scored. I’ve never been sports game before, so it’s really amazing to me.

It’s great to be there, and It was amazing. Now I am a big fan of hockey.

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Last Saturday, I visited Coca Cola Coliseum to watch hockey. I am not familiar with winter sports: especially hockey, ______ is a story in a faraway country. Not to mention I know nothing about hockey.  I had never watched hockey before. But, I decided to watch it. Because I wonder why Canadians are crazy about hockey so much.

____ Stadium is quite far from my home, and due to the closing of the TTC, it’s really hard to go there. Nevertheless, I was pretty excited the whole way to the stadium.

It was Marlies vs Rochester. At the first round, I couldn’t get anything about the game. I did’t understand why they take turns, and I couldn’t see the hockey puck. But, from the second round, i could enjoy the game.

One of my favorite things are ___ connection between players and audience. The audience enjoyed the game, and cheered them on. They also got angry, when Marlies’ goal was not scored. I‘ve never been ___  _ sports game before, so it‘s really amazing to me.

It‘s great to be there, and It was amazing. Now I am a big fan of hockey.

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